Pensieve’s Poetic License
On a visit to Steph at The Red Clay Diaries today, I was led to this poetry site, Pensieve.
A writer friend of mine says she likes to study and write poetry because it gives her the opportunity to examine words from a completely different persepctive than when you’re writing fiction or nonfiction. I couldn’t agree more. So I decided to participate in Pensieve’s monthly Poetic License. The deadline for submissions was Friday, but it was a fun exercise so I’m posting anyway.
The theme was winter or Christmas and the form was haiku or pensieve. I chose the pensieve, defined as this: “A titled, five-line poem; each line correlates to one of the five senses–sight, sound, scent, taste, touch–and describes the subject (title). The goal is for the reader to take on the poem as his own, being able to ‘experience’ your subject through your words, by seeing, hearing, smelling, tasting and feeling what you described.”
Tree Decorating
Giggles and gasps as the tree branches receive their wares one by one:
Glittering glass orbs that sparkle in the white lights;
Gingerbread men, baked with vanilla and cinnamon;
Gilded, bumpy angels, a texture little hands can’t resist.
Ghirardelli hot chocolate, to cap the night off.
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Nice poetry there. Care to drop by my site and maybe trade links? http://www.stolenwreckords.net
Riley!
Good for you! It’s a wonderful poem. Totally captures the senses.
In fact, I think I need to bake some gingerbread today…
Did you do a link from Pensieve? She has Mr. Linky up, so even tho you didn’t make the deadline, you can get linked up.
Steph
That’s great, lady. I am there, indeed.
What a great poem! I love the way you described the ornaments!